05-09-2017, 06:26 PM
Hey aleks, so as I helped a little I just want to give tips like how Oblivion gave me some. You don't have to use them, just my opinion and how you could probably improve.
I'll start off with /warp aleks1 c:
So I like how you used the water you usually get from w/e. (one of my tips :P) I think you could have tried using a different type of style for the trees because they look like the saplings and there's no efforts in them. You also could have tried using a few flowers, even though this is my opinion as I said, and although the bushes around the water look nice you could have added them not together and a little more randomly. You also could have added benches, and bins to make a little bit more of detail. I like the grass and the ferns, since they look natural and look good. The hills also look good, but I would go over them and place grass blocks randomly. Again, my opinion. (:
Now, /warp aleks2.
The thing which triggers me the most is the pond/lake/idk. You placed the water randomly and it isn't flat. I like the use of lily pads, since again more detail. The pond is a little square, don't you think? xD I would probably try to make it a little more "circle-like". :))))
Again, you used saplings and it doesn't look good. :/ I can offer lessons on trees if you like? (even tho I can't make them but I don't use w/e xd) Like how I suggest, I would use white glass stained panes since they make builds look so MUCH BETTER!! ;D
It is shaped like a rectangle, but I would suggest adding a little part on top of it. Make it a loft? Ehh, it's your choice. I like the mix of the wood, looks great. Now the inside. I think you could have kept to one type of leaves; it looks a little weird with the different type, but that's my opinion.
Sorry aleks, don't have enough time to finish this, and I really liked /warp aleks 3 btw.
I think you've got a chance of jr arch! :D
I'll start off with /warp aleks1 c:
So I like how you used the water you usually get from w/e. (one of my tips :P) I think you could have tried using a different type of style for the trees because they look like the saplings and there's no efforts in them. You also could have tried using a few flowers, even though this is my opinion as I said, and although the bushes around the water look nice you could have added them not together and a little more randomly. You also could have added benches, and bins to make a little bit more of detail. I like the grass and the ferns, since they look natural and look good. The hills also look good, but I would go over them and place grass blocks randomly. Again, my opinion. (:
Now, /warp aleks2.
The thing which triggers me the most is the pond/lake/idk. You placed the water randomly and it isn't flat. I like the use of lily pads, since again more detail. The pond is a little square, don't you think? xD I would probably try to make it a little more "circle-like". :))))
Again, you used saplings and it doesn't look good. :/ I can offer lessons on trees if you like? (even tho I can't make them but I don't use w/e xd) Like how I suggest, I would use white glass stained panes since they make builds look so MUCH BETTER!! ;D
It is shaped like a rectangle, but I would suggest adding a little part on top of it. Make it a loft? Ehh, it's your choice. I like the mix of the wood, looks great. Now the inside. I think you could have kept to one type of leaves; it looks a little weird with the different type, but that's my opinion.
Sorry aleks, don't have enough time to finish this, and I really liked /warp aleks 3 btw.
I think you've got a chance of jr arch! :D
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